Comments for Steven Schroeder http://stevenschroeder.org Wed, 12 Oct 2011 15:21:58 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 Comment on lightning fast, October by Crafty Green Poet http://stevenschroeder.org/2011/10/11/lightning-fast-october/#comment-457 Crafty Green Poet Wed, 12 Oct 2011 15:21:58 +0000 http://stevenschroeder.org/2011/10/11/lightning-fast-october/#comment-457 I like the animals in this poem, very nicely done. I like the animals in this poem, very nicely done.

]]> Comment on when a victory is won treat it as a funeral by bathweb http://stevenschroeder.org/2011/05/03/when-a-victory-is-won-treat-it-as-a-funeral/#comment-456 bathweb Tue, 03 May 2011 12:21:12 +0000 http://stevenschroeder.org/2011/05/03/when-a-victory-is-won-treat-it-as-a-funeral/#comment-456 Excellent poem - I was googling for "treat victory like a funeral" as i am going to write a blogpost on the best way to respond to bin Laden's death. Excellent poem – I was googling for "treat victory like a funeral" as i am going to write a blogpost on the best way to respond to bin Laden's death.

]]> Comment on days of rain and now by Short Poems http://stevenschroeder.org/2011/05/02/days-of-rain-and-now/#comment-455 Short Poems Mon, 02 May 2011 21:28:46 +0000 http://stevenschroeder.org/2011/05/02/days-of-rain-and-now/#comment-455 Wisely done! Wisely done!

]]> Comment on Comanche moon by Crafty Green Poet http://stevenschroeder.org/2011/03/18/comanche-moon/#comment-454 Crafty Green Poet Sun, 20 Mar 2011 19:36:19 +0000 http://stevenschroeder.org/2011/03/18/comanche-moon/#comment-454 excellent, specially the ending, excellent, specially the ending,

]]> Comment on three stories by Crafty Green Poet http://stevenschroeder.org/2010/08/11/three-stories/#comment-453 Crafty Green Poet Sat, 14 Aug 2010 19:58:32 +0000 http://stevenschroeder.org/2010/08/11/three-stories/#comment-453 this is wonderful, so well observed but then the stories woven in so beautifully too this is wonderful, so well observed but then the stories woven in so beautifully too

]]> Comment on meditation on some fragments of empedocles by Spindrifter (Sara Mazzolini) http://stevenschroeder.org/2010/06/16/meditation-on-some-fragments-of-empedocles/#comment-452 Spindrifter (Sara Mazzolini) Sun, 08 Aug 2010 21:22:52 +0000 http://stevenschroeder.org/2010/06/16/meditation-on-some-fragments-of-empedocles/#comment-452 Shoo! There's a typo! Sorry for resubmitting:<br /><br />The goldfish is a fleeting blur <br />of dappled transience <br />on the pond stippled with rain<br /><br />The mountain mist blends all boundaries<br />muffles the edge of sound<br />& the wind slowly wanes away<br /><br />as the passer-by comes home<br />snow gusts erase all traces<br />of his passage across the threshold<br />that binds the dead and the living Shoo! There's a typo! Sorry for resubmitting:

The goldfish is a fleeting blur
of dappled transience
on the pond stippled with rain

The mountain mist blends all boundaries
muffles the edge of sound
& the wind slowly wanes away

as the passer-by comes home
snow gusts erase all traces
of his passage across the threshold
that binds the dead and the living

]]> Comment on a bird’s absence by Sara Adeline Mazzolini http://stevenschroeder.org/2010/08/04/a-birds-absence/#comment-451 Sara Adeline Mazzolini Fri, 06 Aug 2010 06:17:06 +0000 http://stevenschroeder.org/2010/08/04/a-birds-absence/#comment-451 Bird traces are snippets of a silent poem inscribed on the pavement. Bird traces are snippets of a silent poem inscribed on the pavement.

]]> Comment on a theory of everything by Crafty Green Poet http://stevenschroeder.org/2010/07/14/a-theory-of-everything/#comment-450 Crafty Green Poet Fri, 16 Jul 2010 07:35:57 +0000 http://stevenschroeder.org/2010/07/14/a-theory-of-everything/#comment-450 brilliant, I like the links you make between things in this brilliant, I like the links you make between things in this

]]> Comment on Kun Iam by Crafty Green Poet http://stevenschroeder.org/2010/05/31/kun-iam/#comment-449 Crafty Green Poet Mon, 31 May 2010 16:54:08 +0000 http://stevenschroeder.org/2010/05/31/kun-iam/#comment-449 there's a wonderful sense of stillness in this. there's a wonderful sense of stillness in this.

]]> Comment on anticipating snow by S.L. Corsua http://stevenschroeder.org/2010/02/22/anticipating-snow/#comment-448 S.L. Corsua Wed, 21 Apr 2010 20:27:44 +0000 http://stevenschroeder.org/2010/02/22/anticipating-snow/#comment-448 The addition of the word "waiting" here is a classy touch of profundity. ;) I like how, with just that word, you've added layers. A variable of sentiments, to the captured moment. The addition of the word "waiting" here is a classy touch of profundity. ;) I like how, with just that word, you've added layers. A variable of sentiments, to the captured moment.

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